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Old 09-14-2016, 03:32 PM   #1
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I Finished My Demo And I'm Happy Of The Way It Turned Out
Thanks for being open enough to let me share some tunes with you.

I'm on SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/dylanbriscall

All the songs on Early Mornings, Late Nights, and Long Roads were written and composed by me and were produced by Joel Kazmi--who’s worked with artists like The Tea Party, Rush, N’sync, Sum 41, and Anne Murray.

If you don't want to listen that is absolutely cool and if you can recommend some new music or mention any great shows you've seen lately, that would be great.

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Old 09-14-2016, 05:26 PM   #2
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Old 09-14-2016, 05:55 PM   #3
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Old 09-14-2016, 05:59 PM   #4
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I lisented.

The instrumentals are horrible in the backroom. It need a lot more edge. The first 30 seconds sounds like something my gradmother would listen to on her soft rock channels. After that it started to get good, then came the hook. It was so soft. Change up the instrumentals a bit. Speed the songs up and dont make the song such a whiney baby thing aboug searching for love. Ad some material into it. Give it more edge. Right now that song wouldnt even be considered for a wedding. Step it up. Get more edgy.
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Old 09-14-2016, 06:01 PM   #5
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The instrumentals are all wrong. I think you going for a Jack Mannequine sound and its failing badlly
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Old 09-14-2016, 06:04 PM   #6
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I'm on the 3rd song
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Old 09-14-2016, 06:07 PM   #7
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I really like the 3rd song, but i think a stronger backround instrumental would bring it to life... It's too folk song . Way to folk song. Let it live. man. Add harder instruments. Put an electric guitar in there. That 3rd song is beggin go live. Let it live.
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Old 09-14-2016, 06:10 PM   #8
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The 3rd song is your best, But all of them need to be let out instrumentally. They all sound like something that was produced on windows 3.1. Need harder instruments. You could really do something with the 3rd song. The first 2 are kinda junk. Good luck with those. Focus on the 3rd and make it a bit edgier.
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Old 09-14-2016, 08:30 PM   #9
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